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i havent submitted here inna while. heres my latest and greates hit song =)

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Great synths

This is a nice sounding track. You've got a lot of variety in the synths. The intro has that great bass, but to be honest, the drums that follow don't really appeal to me. I know your background is in rock, but I think a straight 4*4 electronic beat would make the track sound better, with a snare on the 2 and the 4, instead of the pattern you've got now.
There's some good harmonizations and everything works together well (possibly not the choir sample, a bit cheesy :P), just the beat lets it down a little bit I think.
Keep going, its good to see you try some more techno.

zerofalse responds:

yeah.. i know what you mean, the techno genre is a relatively new thing in my life, lol. you said i shouldnt use the sample choir, but i dont know how to like use VST's and soundfonts to download in fl studio's x_x thanx alot for the advice though man i appreciate it. keep rockin your music \m/

Not bad at all

A little repetitive, but thats to be expected with most electronic music eh? Just check your levels like the guy suggested earlier and youre set.

zerofalse responds:

hah. yeah, glad yo liked it
well, i didnt really notice the static in the backround untill i got reveiws and listend a little more closely. well, thanks! ill review some of your stuff

it was pretty good since i <3 it

i liked it but im bored of it cause i hear it a lot at ur place
lol
lates

zerofalse responds:

lol, yeahh

Hey this is nice!

This is a good track, a little repetitive but good. The only thing i didn't like is the first sound that the song starts with. The rest is fine, the synths are nice.

I like how the song ended so sudden "in my face" kind of feeling. I think that the chorus doesn't have it's place in this track, i think maybe another instrument would do better.

Also i think that i hear some "static" or some "distortion" in a few places. That's all about checking your volume levels. If some instruments aren't heard loud enough you can always lower the other ones that way you eliminate the chances of "distortion".

All in all this is a good song. Keep it up!

zerofalse responds:

thanks soo for the tips seriously! i need them =) i think your right about the distorsion thing. i found that some of the instriuments sound like their collideing. yeahh, but in time ill get better as does everyone else that makes music. your really good urself. your songs rock! =) thanx for the review!!

this is cool

A lot of the big name audio portal artists earlier work sounds like this i think its sounds of things to come it wasn't bad Peace syntrus out (0_0) PS hit me back if u like

zerofalse responds:

thanx for the review and recignition. its definently a great feeling knowing that people enjoy listening to music i make. thankz again

Credits & Info

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Listens
737
Downloads
183
Votes
5
Score
4.30 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 3, 2006
2:36 PM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
1.1 MB
1 min 12 sec

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