Yeaaah
It has a good melody, its originality and diversity are not even to be mentionned since i dont think i heard something like this before around here... Clarity 10, perfect sound to me...
For the efforts... i gave you an 8... because you could've worked harder on the way the Bass goes on... i mean... it would be hard to spit anything on this seriously... so my point is... create a rythm with the bass... and with the melody behind... it could get real good... some good ol' bass... cause the way it is right now... its more like easy listenin... something i could just sit, and relax to...
But still overally good man, for real.
Keep them coming, and dont feel the urge to submit something everyday... take your time if you feel it can lead you to something even better.
9/10
4/5
Take it easy man
P'z