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Credits & Info

Date
01/11/2013
File Info
Song
10.4 MB
4 min 34 sec
Score
3.80 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.80 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
520 Plays | 27 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - House
Tags:
house
bass
electronic
cactar65

Author Comments

Tell me what you like or dislike i hope you enjoy it as much as i do. also i cant decide what genre it was so i put house

Reviews


Music-storyMusic-story

Rated 5 / 5 stars

You asked so I give review.

I don't really care what genre you put this song in even if it may not be house. However, I will say your ping pong fx sound is quite a interesting move on your part. Your trance pad is unfortunately not well done. Messy and poorly mastered.

0:33 so much better with that trance pad gone. Nothing impressive with the bass, but I think we got something going with the lead instrument's composition. It may need some work for instrument sound, but kudos on the patterns used.

0:54 Need a revision of that chordal instrument. Too generic.

1: 51 Really? Just a clap layer added? Where is the climax?

2:05 - end: not much to add as it is looping.

Overall, spend more time on your instruments. What I mean by that is to clean up your instruments (better mixing) and make more unique sounding (less generic instruments). There needs to be some kind of climax in your song. I don't notice one. I will say kudos on the interesting composition and staying in key for most of the song. Best of luck in your future songs. 5/5


cactar65 responds:

thank you for the review im not gonna lie i didn't spend a crazy amount of time on this song like i should have. But I liked it enough to post and I really am thankful for the review.