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Finished the damn thing.
Great song, not sure if it's complextro really, complextro is more like my song "Brix."
And there are some very minor errors like sound lvls & Transitions, & i feel noobie or.. idk since my review is so short
The rising in the intro was not bad. the rising reminded me of Earthbound. However, I feel the deep bass comes in a bit too so, could have waited for a pause then added it in there so it has a cleaner entrance to the song.
The drums are simple in rhythm and you get the image of a few people clapping and someone playing a drum rhythm that goes from simple to slightly off balance which makes a nice drum rhythm.
The sudden change in rhythm at 1:35 was nice and then having the deep bass enter again at that time sounds much cleaner for its entrance to the rhythm.
However, for the deep bass I could recommend that from time to time it changes for a moment, to a possible going down pace, so that the synth is going up and the bass is going down to make things interesting.
The secondary synth coming into the song was nice. Then the wubs were cleans and very lightly used making the sound smooth enough to enjoy.
Overall, I would work on the bass line, aside from that, great work.
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Somehow not responding to your review for 3 days makes me feel guilty. :/ ...And I never know how to respond to helpful reviews, so...
Thanks for the review! :3
First of all, I love your username.
I also love the build-up. It's a bit clichÃ©, but the length is perfect, which is something you don't see that often. But what I definitely like most about this is that, while it's a combination of dubstep and electro-house, it doesn't blast your ears off. I really dislike songs that do, so it's nice to have some variation. Another thing I liked about this more than usual is that the calm bits in this song are not there just to have a contrest with loud music, but that they sounded nice, even when the rest wouldn't have been loud.
Not everything about this song is perfect however. If I had to name something I dislike, what would first pop up in my head is that for the first minute the buzzer (I really don't know how it's called, it starts at sixteen seconds) is too loud. Partly because it's sudden it grabs all the attention. It's the strongest for the first thirty seconds it plays, where it is the only thing I can listen to. Maybe it's just because I don't really like the sound though, I don't know.
When, after 46 seconds, the beat kicked in it felt like it was a second beat. I didn't know what the buzzer was supposed to be because it was louder than the beat, but I didn't like the sound on its own.
I'd like to end positively, because this song ended positively for me as well. As the song progressed I gradually got to like it more. It started to sound more like a song than annoying sounds in a rhythm. Especially the clearer bit which started at 2:27 is something that made the song better for me. After you threw more sound effects in there after this bit I completely forgot about the irritating stuff. Nicely done.
A large part of this review is negative, but that doesn't mean the song is not good. The electronic sounds are just not my cup of tea. I hope you can also get a review from another member who can appreciate this genre more.
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Short response to well-worded reviews to make myself guilt-ridden when I read my response several days later:
Cliche'd stuffs are my strong suits. Loud musics hurts my ears. :C
The loud, distort-ish, sorta dirty bass thing? Cut a wee bit from the mids, I guess?
I don't really know how to respond to that... :/
Thank you for taking your time to give this review. :)
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