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It's another WIP (sorry dax), but I want to know what you think of it because I'm lovin' it, but I'm also insane.
Anyway... I've been listening to a lot of Phutureprimitive, Opiuo and Blackmill lately, so I tried to kind of combine them all into one tastey microscopic strip of deliciousness.
good stuff good stuff
difficult to rate here 'cause it isn't finished yet but i think you just want to here opinions rather than a rating right? ;)
after i listened to this i checked out your old track "helium", wich i still love, to check out what this track "atomic bacon" might need for the future. 'cause i had the feeling that both tracks are somehow kinda similar. and than i got it. it might be a nice experiment if you go in a depressing mode in the "drop" (wich isn't a real drop in chill ambient or progressive trance... i know xP)
i love the little impact you added in 0:02 (right at the beginning) but it could be a little more present.
0:13 that thingy in the background that you added right at the end of the rythm (i always call something like this "exaggeration", 'cause it sounds like overdoing it to change the rythm / beat a bit without changing the tact / bar wich is a really cool way to give the track more life ^^)
well, kinda nice idea there, but how would the track be like if you change that "exaggeration" wich is played in kinda high tones into the same "exaggeration" with deeper /darker / lower tones instead of those high tones? (you already did it in 0:26-0:27 but that isn't dark enough for me :P)
i love that tone that the piano played at 0:25. fits perfectly!
the beat of the drums are fine, nothing to complain about.
please keep in mind that some sounds are a bit blurred / dim (0:15 - 0:20)
hm i can imagine this track to be a good piece of music. lets see what you will bring us folks in the future :).
PS: man writing all that stuff in english is fucking difficult... =O took me half an hour or more. if i have to write again such difficult stuff i will shoot myself -.-
You should just get fl studio so we can collab. You seem to have a more technical understanding, such as being able to pick notes out and stuff like that. Plus, i think we would make a great team.
Anyways, thank you as always for the review and for all the support.
P.S. someone told me the kick needed more umph and i dont really see why, having just listened to it on the good speakers. And someone else said that it sounds like porno music. Thoughts, anyone?
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