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freshly baked out of the fl studio!
The Beat was a good beat but it seems to be a loop. It continues throughout the entire song without any change which makes for boring listening. the beat is the most crucial part of a House song.
Like if you listen to Swedish House Mafia, they have a recurrent beat but with a lot of breaks. They have some good background noise, like the vocals continuing . I use Fl so, you could take the kick and some parts replace it with a nice synth sound, that would definitely benefit the song. The synth sounds you have in there seems low and dark, a higher more up bringing sound would make people like it better. I would also bring the Tempo up to grab more excitement. Maybe add some vocals that you could send through the vocoder in FL. The Vocals would add to the song and make the beat more appreciated, because its less criticized. Most people focus on the vocals.
Overall, a nice start! Hopefully you can take into consideration this constructive criticism. Maybe i can even help you if you PM me.
Thanks mate, much appreciated on the feedback. It Is dark & low but this Is the start of a demo and project I just finished 4hrs ago and Ill take In consideration your feedback Dj-Zambo If you would like to help me out with this track that would be great.
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