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ive no idea what im doing.
Pretty good song man. Saw this on VS wich I am part of btw :D.
I think u should use few advice by me :) First of all, the kick in intro is too loud, EQ low freq or turn the vol. down by automatization. The bass might sound better without the beat at first time, at least u wouldnt use beat that much. Beat change at 2:17 was kinda wierd, instead of building up becouse of sweep in, u pretty f*cked it up.
On the other hand, the part after 2:30 was great. Next time try to use white noise sweep in / out or at least sweep outs to make drops bigger. As much as this part is great, as much is repeative. Maybe another build up or new synth might prevent it from being so repeative. The beep sound around 4:00 was really quite.
The rest of song was just... wow... I cant belive u really looped it for about 4 minutes :D what the hell man... Its good loop, but u CANT loop it for 4 MINUTES ! omg man.
Overal rating: Good song, miss few things, too repeative.
Thanks for the input.
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