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An exploration of self in search of truth.
This beat is thuggin.
Thizug life my nizzle. Or something like that.
Here I stand again, listening to the echoes of failed promises travel down this corridor of time but I am unmoved. A promise is either a symbol of hope and trust or a precursor of failure and we who pace this corridor have long heard the echoes.
There are those of us that have escaped the endless echos of this corridor. But that's just what we told ourselves to feel better about the prison we escaped to. It's much quieter here. But I may never leave this place. Left only with my own broken thoughts and insecurities. So many have come to this place, yet I've never seen a soul. Maybe it's because I'm too busy trying to find my own.
The little subtle sound's in the background were great for this song, Especially 'dem "Wo-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha's" that kept resounding in the background, the constant up keeped beat of this song really added a nice touch to it as well, the little bit's of Misc. sound's in the background were great as well, However, the song sounded very synthetic, this being a personal opinion, you could have used some sampled bits of real sound, and it would have been perfect! The melody that came in at 2:25, didn't seem to land in at the right moment with the beat ongoing through out the whole song, a little bit of variation would have also made this a lot better too, other than that, Amazing Job!
I'm currently working on getting more organic sounds in my work. It really fucks with my writing process but the change is necessary. I'm waiting to find the balance.
Love the beat at the beginning, and your transitions at :23 and :41 were nice and smooth! You definitely kept the energy up throughout the whole thing, and I liked the instruments you used. You even surprised me with a "melody" at 2:25! The only thing I'm going to pick on is that it seemed a bit repetitive. The whole thing was basically a variation of the same two-three riffs. I think you can do more with those riffs...maybe change to the key signature somewhere in the song, or transpose the bass up an octave at one point. Still, it's really catchy and energetic, and I liked the way it ended, too. Great job! :)
I agree with you on the repetitive nature of the track. I've got a few projects in the works that are a bit more flexible in terms of variation. They should be done before too long.
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