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Remaster of a track that was pretty popular on newgrounds, anxiety attack, I did quite a bit of polishing, this'll probably be the last remaster I upload, since all the remasters from cloud kicker can be bought on iTunes and Bandcamp.
== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==
The mixing is pretty darn solid, but unfortunately the composition and melodies don't hold up. The melodies seem to just go around randomly, without any sort of direction or contour to them. The piano break is a good idea to allow some relief to the techno section, but the piano melodies have the same problem: they don't really have any direction either. Keep working at it! 5
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 3/4
Thanks a ton for the critique, I appreciate the analysis and honestly:3
Here's my detailed review as promised.
Instruments need more stereo widening. The choice of snare drum used was not appropriate as it felt lifeless. You could have just used reverb and compressed the shit out if it.
Mix was well balanced - nothing too drastic standing out. I'm not a nazi against repetitiveness, so I thought the track was pretty good in general.
Thanks man, appreciate it:3
I'll look into stereo widening.
Don't let other people put you down. Your music is awesome. I'm not sure if you mastered the arps at all but they sound really plain...try adding some layers!
Thanks:D I don't think I'll be going back and redoing anything on this, but thanks for the criticism.
This is really good! I like the intense beat to it. Keep up the good work!
P.S. Did you get that request I sent you in 2012
Thanks, glad you like it:3
I can't recall, I get lots of requests tbh, I'll pm you.
awesome song you have here :P
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