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Draft rock track
At first i was like
"hey nice drums"
Then i was like
"woah kickass guitar enter!"
Overall, this is a very catchy song. It tempts me to try and sing to it. If i could get some nice lyrics for it i mean. And thats actualy umm a request. Because, when i sure do alot - i cannot come up with a nice lyrics. Mostly Because english isnt my native. You understand right? But if you would be interested in having this shitty me singing to you song just fetch me some lyrics and i would love to give it a try. I know i am not Sinatra. But hey, no one here is right? right? ._.
As of the song, i think its missing few thing. Or no, not actualy "missing". Thats not what i have in mind. Its more like "how can you make the song even better then it is already"-sort of thing.
For starters: some sort of fluid ending. As of now - the song just ends suddenly like being cut off. Some sort of musical summary (if you know what i mean) would do wonders here.
Another and the last thing i can think of is to maybe add some more SFX, more instruments (if its possible i mean). Even a plain ambience in the background would be great. Thats mostly because both guitar and drums are somewhat "jumpy". And my "jumpy" i mean that they have a hearable muted moments when no sound is playing. A suitable ambience in the background would patch it up nicely.
No more sins i remember :)
Just a solid piece of music.
One word AWESOME!!!
Nice. I like tracks like these.
Thanks. I'm trying to make more in the same style - or is it that i can't make any in any other style. Thanks for the review.
EzDrummer! Good tune, nice playing solid recordings. HOWEVER. There is some massive amounts of EQ'ing that needs to be done. And you NEED bass. You have good potential!
Yeah EZ unfortunately I can't play drums where i'm renting at the mo. Really glad you liked it. Im trying to add more bass esp in the new tracks. Thanks for the review
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