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Surprise MotherF***ers. Due to increased ammount of subscribers I'll continue posting songs in this channel.
i felt that the intro was a bit weak and didnt really match the song very well, and didnt really go with the tune. however, the song later on got better and (i think) from 1:20 it got better.
I feel like this song was like many sounds just jammed together, and not much has been put into this, for the transitions weren't that good....
otherwise this is a good song, just a bit rough on the edges....
I'm gonna have to agree with TheDoor6 on this one, the first synth was a bit strange, but I like it. The chords were a bit "de-tuned" in terms of the chord choice, not necessarily the synth. The abstract atmosphere of the piece really suits the tune I think. It's one of those songs that people think aren't well-written but have potential. Good job, 4/5.
The instrument you used at the beginning was a little strange, but I like the big climax you have at the beginning. The distorted chords starting at around :58 were a little too muddy and industrial for my tastes, but I like what you did with those drums- all the breaks added a lot to the song. The "break-down" at 2:54 was good, and I liked the melody at 3:04, but I thought the transition at 2:53 was a little rough. Liked how you brought a lot of the elements of the song together again at 4:38, but in general I think the piece is too long. To make it more engaging, maybe you could increase the tempo. I must say- liked the way you ended the piece. I thought it was original and fitting. Despite my criticism, it's a well-crafted piece, with a lot of emotional ups-and-downs, which I like. Good job. Keep up the good work. :)
Thanks for the review :)
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