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Was gonna submit this for Dreams of Splendor, but unfortunately it was made too early...
Around 2:26 where it started getting "choppy" (for lack of a better word) was my favourite part. The whole thing had potential, actually, but sadly the beginning and especially the ending sounded out of key/discordant. Like I said, you certainly have potential, and I'd love to see you improve! To do that, you need to get the hang of both keys and mixing. Once you've done that, I see good things ahead.
I actually purposely put it out of tune at the end, trying to make some sort of creepy feel. I'll change the key a bit.
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