My third song!
Went for more of a jolly and upbeat feel with this one :D
Nice
This one is pretty good nice feel for it has a nice tune and can build up quick with an uplifting beat that keeps going I think it's almost perfect I would throw in some other stuff to stretch it out just a tad more but other then that this was pretty good if you ask me
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Stretch out some more sounds and instraments so that it's a tad longer
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oooooo i like it its pree catchy :P nice work
:P i attempt to make my music as catchy as i can.
Thanks for the review.
I'll give it a 4/5 because it seems like you could definitely go somewhere with this in the future. It has a great premise, it just wasn't executed too well, but everyone starts somewhere.
Keep on improving! You clearly enjoy making music, just keep on making it.
I do indeed enjoy making music and i strive to improve :D
Starts off a bit slow, and then it... doesn't really speed up at all. :) The snares add some intensity , and the melody is interesting, but it still feels a bit plain. There's potential though, added layers and maybe pace and it would be great. Keep it up!
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Thanks for the tips
Haha this song is awesome but it needs more it's like the same thing over and over again
but still this song is great good job! :3
:D thanks man, it's always awesome getting reviews from you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
benc98 
