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I kept it short, tried to bring the melody out so instead of chords i just play bass melody against the main melody (like Bach..). I'm proud of it!
However I do have a couple of issues, one being the guitar sounds a bit too quiet as you play. The remedies for this could be either play louder or record closer to the microphone.
The other issue I notice with this is the bass seems to sound a bit louder than it should. At most it should be lower in volume to where it back up the guitar for the song.
Overall, just some minor recording issues is all.
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You're right! I think I did rushed on the recording I should had spent some more time working on it now that I listen to it.
Thanks for listening to it man :)
Let me start by saying this could be a lot better. The sound sounds incredibly low, I can barely hear the guitar playing. There is not much to this song. Sounded really plain and not really interesting. I kinda got lost in this song because I had no idea what was going on. Also, the song seems way too short.
Things to improve on would be to make the song louder and longer. IMO, add more instruments and a storyline to the song. I know that you can do better than this.
-Seamonky: Review Request Club
Thanks for giving it a listen :)
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