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The fifth piece of my project Tredecim : the 13 cycles of doom.
" You have been deeply wounded, both physically and mentally. You want it to stop by any means. But the only remedy to your suffering is death.
Nothing will ease your Pain."
I get what your going for in this but you need to work on your mixing alittle more
one thing I learned about mixing is you have to keep doing it to get better at it
The feel and melody fit the description very well. The percussion drop around the last 3rd of the song is really good!
This really needs mastering, though. All the sounds fight for the middle frequency, and low frequency needs a pump. Every instrument needs some parametric mastering, so they're not all playing in the same spot. I think some light overdrive on the lower and middle-frequency sounds would make this a little clearer?
Overall arrangement, melody, and details are good, production is weak. With a but of attention this could sound really good!
The note is kinda harsh, but the review is fair and useful. I'll keep that in mind.
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