good but short

This was an awesome song, but just when I got into it, it stopped. Your description said that it's going to be completely different, but are you going to finish this version of the song?

A good start on a "final fight" theme

I see where you are going with this concept. Its a nice melody to. but I suggest using like something with more Power to it. Like how a Panther would react to an ambush. automate it tho...

Overall its a good start but expiriment with different samples.

If you are using FL Studio let me know.

And don't forget to check out my library as well... I've gotten a few people to change their music styles after they listen to what I put out. Cheers.