got to say that what I heard was not bad but it anything to write home to about, you have decent quality loved that, the problem was the emotional connections you had with each character you feel it, I feel it, when you connect with the character of the voices you have to connect.
Feel what they feel, you have the voice just mold it better give it more emotion and playback and compare, if its not perfect to you then its not done! I expect to see more from here. -ZxO.oxZ