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This submission is very different from what i usually do but i am determined to participate on as many contests as possible and broaden the genres i feel comfortable in as much as i can so here it is!
After some time hearing Chrons examples and analising a bit of how they were composed i tried to make a happy kind of cheesy song that sounded like those happy 50's compositions where they try to make us think that everything is perfect and fun.
The Cheesy lyrics xD:
The sun is bright on my face
It lightens my day
The trees are laughing with me
We are such a happy family
Smile, the whole world is waiting for you to
Smile, everyone will like a
Smile, make your day brighter with a
Smile, lets make a better world
just Smile!
Got 3rd place :D
Cheers!!
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Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 10, 2012
Sounds like a mix of Nirvana and Paper Mario, I like it!
Anyway... Am I the only one who finds this combination of happy-go-lucky instruments and psychedelic singing just a bit disturbing (or somewhat sad)? It's really interesting but it's not purely happy in my opinion... There's this creepy feeling to it and I don't really know how to explain it properly!
=P
Thanks for the review Plunder!
Well that's the proof of my failure xD
I admit i failed hugely in making a happy singing on my track and that was the objective in the contest...but yeah im all about dark and psychadelic so i guess the song drifted away from what i wanted and ended up being a lot stranger that what i intended it to be :D
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 2, 2012
NAC Judging
The little harp is very typical of that kind of music so that was cool :D The singing made it sound more like a trip on LSD than anythign else lol but the music was pretty cool.
Yeah i realized i failed the singing after i heard the song a few times, oh well blame the Beatles and their LSD inspired songs, they inspired me! xD
Thanks for the comment Evil-Dog!
Rated 5 / 5 stars December 2, 2012
NAC Judge
hahaha this is so cheesy I love it.. the voice was a nice touch.. altho the droniness of the voice compared with the perkiness of the song kinda added an odd contrast hahaha..
9.5/10!
-shawn-
I am actually quite surprised you like it, once i submitted it a voice in the back of my head was telling me..Chron is going to hate that shit..i am happy it was wrong xD
Yeah i am still working on my mixing and also my vocals need a lot of work.
Thanks for the comment Chron!
Rated 3 / 5 stars November 29, 2012
Well, as far as cheezy i think you captured that but the happines part is a little lost in translation nice attempt though
Yeah i guess so, i am not particularly happy with the piece but i wanted to take part in the contest anyway xD.
Thanks!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 25, 2012
Gosh. I wish I can sing. Really good song. Man, I'm not in this contest this time...
I wish i could sing too...but well gotta do the most with what i have.
NOO you broke your promise xD just kiddin we will "see" each other in other contest for sure!
See ya!