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Date
11/13/2012
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Song
8.5 MB
3 min 44 sec
Score
4.52 / 5.00

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Rated 4.52 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
Tags:
nerd
thrash
symphonic
hammerspace

Author Comments

Track 03 from Hammerspace's "Volume 1: Reset, Repair, Restore"

Sentimental song with the use of nerdy metaphor. Bet.

facebook.com/metalofnerds

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travelling down into the center of this world, we
find we are bound within the tragedy unfurled, see
nothing can change 'til we manipulate the script, so
why do we wait until we're stuck inside the pit

no more will we try
push on to failure have we crossed the line
where will we go when all is lost and there is no more time
how can it be that me and you have come to you and i
when does it end, are we content with what we couldn't find

stuck inside this dreamland
wishing this would never end
looking back at my trend
failure is my only friend
back against the wall, we
capture what we can't keep
giving up what we need
can't we learn to just be we

travelling down into the center of this world, we
haven't the right to make assumptions of what could be
no more control, we've gone so far so fast we can't see
it's all the same, what we have done together endlessly

how can we try, push on to failure we have crossed the line
where will we go when all is lost and there is no more time

stuck inside this dreamland
wishing this would never end
looking back at my trend
failure is my only friend
back against the wall, we
capture what we can't keep
giving up what we need
we can learn to just be we

Reviews


DM692DM692

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 17, 2012

Overall very good track, but has a couple areas it could be improved on.

For one, did you attempt mixing a bit of reverb on whispering vocals? Using a slight degree of it tends to soften up the hard consonant sounds to a level that seems like it would be more consistent with the instrumentation.

Secondly, the ABBBC rhyme pattern in the first 5 lines of the chorus seems to heavily detract from the otherwise solid songwriting. Though this may be personal, I find that using too many end rhymes in a row tends to lean towards a more juvenile sound.

Other than that, everything from the synths to (a large majority of) the mixing is extremely well done.


l0vemetal responds:

Thanks for the feedback, man! Appreciate the informative response... I'll keep this in mind when I record the next album :)


kp572kp572

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 13, 2012

cool more


l0vemetal responds:

You can download the album for free at facebook.com/metalofnerds


PoniiboiPoniiboi

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 13, 2012

I still have this album on repeat.


l0vemetal responds:

Good shit, bro >:) I'll have our track finished soon... had some shit come up IRL 'n been slackin a little