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Traveller's Dance WIP

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Credits & Info

Date
10/28/2012
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
1 min 9 sec
Score
4.52 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.52 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
477 Plays | 24 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool
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Author Comments

feedback?

lyrics:
I'm a pack rat on the next track, The last cat to have a wet nap
I can sense that this dead map, is going nowhere
But then I snap back, I pretend that,This chit chat is the contact
for me to connect, you can bet, I will go there
Expect me to extend the message, send it across the room
Project it in your section, this sentence wants to continue
Ill give you a intellectual choice, a few to choose
Confusion, red or blue, your political views
Mixed together, blend the hues, stencil for bruise,
Oooo...., this suspense is entertainment news
It's rude, the rules are broken, no straight edge around
The pools open, because ocean soaked into the ground
No, A fish can't swim in a river of sand
I'll dig the ditch, add blisters to these callous hands
I'll be the savage man standing at an average stance
With a slanted back, backpack, this is my traveller's dance

Reviews


WolfieWolfie

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 28, 2012

I was expecting some happy, upbeat beat based on the title lol.

Anyways, I'm with John; It was a bit difficult to make out what you were saying in this song. Maybe another take would be good, to work on the clarity?

The delivery on the "entertainment news" line was nice though, I liked that.

This could be pretty cool when finished, so I'll be sure to catch it when it's done.


MickeyMao responds:

thanks Wolfiespawn :D


KlazikNadiKlazikNadi

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 28, 2012

Spaceheater! haha.. nice WIP!


MickeyMao responds:

I need power in there first... I might have to fill a steel bucket with diesel a light it up for heat :P

Thanks Klazik


PoniiboiPoniiboi

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 28, 2012

This should definitely have a higher score. Your asthma doesn't sound as bad on this song. But for real, tho, GREAT beat choice, I really think you should finish this song, cuz when ur verse ended and that sound came in, I was like, OMG this track is the shiz. It needs to be a whole song.

Lyrics: Honestly, I listened to the thing like 8 times straight, couldn't determine what you were talkin about exactly, not cuz the lyrics were not coherent, but because I cannot understand your accent.

The sound of this, just pure audio, is very good and unique and entertaining.


MickeyMao responds:

I do this hobby music for reviews like. Props to Sunra for the sick beat. I feel you on the accent/delivery of the lyrics, I recorded this in an unheated shack, and it was cold af, when I take another shot at this I'll work on clearing it up (the best I can).

Thanks for this great feedback, you are awesome!