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this is just a short love song i made for my girlfriend of three months!
she most luv it
You have some nice melodies and composure in this song. I enjoyed it a lot actually. I can't really comment on much. The one thing that kinda bugged me was your intro built up and I was expecting to hear a more epic or more intense song it was building at :39 it sounds like it should be going into a totally new and upbeat awesome song. Everything before that predicts it. But once it got into that next part of the song. It was pretty good. It sounded a little bland at sometimes because it was only a drum beat going. But it all flowed very nicely! Nice work! Your composure and structure was awesome, I would love to see what you can do with orchestral or something like that.
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my original song "Boundless" and give feedback!
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5/5 star rating
will do my friend!
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