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Credits & Info

Date
10/09/2012
File Info
Song
4.7 MB
2 min 3 sec
Score
4.25 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.25 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
400 Plays | 21 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
Tags:
techno
ambient

Author Comments

Hope you like it :)

Reviews


johnfnjohnfn

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 20, 2012

You made a post asking about why no one seemed to love this one. Although strictly speaking it was self advertisement (omg, how dare you!!!!!!!!!) I thought I would drop in and say a little bit about it anyways.

First of all I want to say that I review a little differently than most Newgrounds people. I put '2.5' as the average scoring audio, so giving you a 2 doesn't mean I abjectly hate this song, I just think its a bit below average. And I'm not going to be voting obnoxiously low either, so don't worry about that.

My main points for improvement:

* The entire song seems to really be based on the same chord progression, which sounds very dissonant. This is probably my biggest problem. The progression just isn't that interesting without some additional spice, be it melody or filters or whatever.
* I hear the FL preset kick, snare and hat. You should vary that up.
* This song really doesn't *go* anywhere. It could do with some more transitions or new instruments.

Those were my main thoughts. I know you can do good stuff though (I listened to some of your other songs) so don't be discouraged and don't give up. Keep it up!


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Deshiel responds:

Thanks man, your review is great and those two stars don't bother me, because you've validated them with this review ;)