DemoTech1

I made this track in an attempt to get better with composition style and keeping up with what I can do. I know I am not the best but I like doing this so I do it when Inspiration hits me.
I am not an artist with inspiration all the time, but when I get inspiration its usually something I can do relatively fast and pretty nice.

Reviews

cdk121

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 11, 2012

By far your the best song you've made. Keep it up! Perhaps adding in maybe a second or two at the end to help it loop might help a little, Although that pause transcends into a nice drop when it re-loops to the starting, Very nice work indeed this is.

ferret854 responds:

Thanks so much for reviewing and the feedback, I have needed someone like you to help with some input as to what would be better in my tracks.
As well I appreciate the feedback and will work on making it a little better, I had never thought to make it "loop friendly" but thats where I thought the pause drop was good.

Sares

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 10, 2012

Wow. This is REALLY good, but it could use a little bit of fine tuning. Although it does build, it still starts off pretty intense. Make draw that out a little bit. The ending could be better also. I feel like it ends pretty abruptly. Other than that, the song is great.

ferret854 responds:

Thanks for the feedback.
My music is notorious for its lack of a fade out ending, this was designed for a pause drop loop more than a single playthrough, the fine tuning part Im trying to work on. Thank you for your input and if you want me to check out any of your stuff feel free to message me. I'll check it out as soon as I get around to NG again.