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I have had this song for at least three months now. And I just got stuck on a certain part and didn't know what to do after. But a few days ago I got back onto the song and I finished it up! I hope you guys all enjoy it!
Nice song. I really love the transitions from soft to heavy.
The drums are done very nicely. And I love the keys. The ending feels a bit weird though.
Thank you! And what part of the ending is weird exactly? But thanks, I appreciate the review!
This is just... Wow. Amazing. Please keep making songs like this! :)
I'll do my best! I'm glad that you liked it so much! :D
This suffers from the musician's quality of needing better vsti instrument's but that should never get in the way of getting in the way of a musician because it's ideas that motivate you. At it's core a pop song is supplied by a singer's personal melody , but as a classical stand point it needs more variation to keep the listener interested.
Personally I would use some slight reverb on the instrument's and make it loop properly, or make at least a proper ending for it.
What I love is the mood it create's. :-) A sense of enjoyment.
Thanks for the review! yeah, I think you are right, I really should get some better VSTI instruments. And I'm not sure what you mean by make it loop properly, if you mean the entire song looping, then I'm not intending for the song to loop at all. If it's not that, I really don't know what you mean, I will probably send you a message and ask DX But I'm glad you liked the mood it created, unfortunately I can't think of an atmosphere in a video game or a film that this could fit in. But the music I have made makes me happy and i think for making a song out of pure enjoyment, that is just fine.
I appreciate the review though!
It sounds more like a concept because of the simplicity in its repetition, i also cant find a theme in the melody as it sticks to much to a single chord, that might be the theme on its own but i dont know about that.
At the start i found the bells a bit unnecessary at 00:31, overall there is just to little change to make it interesting and even becomes nagging as its just one chord most of the time throughout the track.
Maybe im of the few in this not to like such, it might be personal preferrence.
As for the quality itself its ok appart from the piano, could use some filter cut to make it softer.
Yeah, I wasn't really going for a specific theme, but more of something to work as I guess almost a pop song. I'm not really expecting people to use this in their games or movies or anything, I just do it for enjoyment.
And I don't know why people hate on the bells, I don't really get why DX. I kinda liked them and I don't think that adding it is really unnecessary or necessary, but more of just something to add to the song.
But I appreciate the review though. Thanks!
Ooh, nice one! :) I feel like most of what i want to say is already said in the past comments... Drums and guitar awesomeness and all that... But seriously, good, job... The drums were pretty epic... I can never keep my attention on making my drums really unique... But i'm glad you were able to. :D
Nice one... Keep improving!
Thanks! I really appreciate the comments! They always make my day just a little bit better :D
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