More reverberation in the beginning for sure.
You could tie the high parts from 0:20-0:30ish.
I like 1:10.
1:21 could be more emotional.

I really like this piece. Might be the best I have heard so far on Newgrounds. Thanks for posting this song.

man I love it its so peace...

you certainly have a good vision for jaz.if possible would you see about adding more instruments to this song?it could be me,but i kinda feel like its misin out on a little more kick to the jazz for lack of saxaphones guitars or trumpets.other then that you have done an impressive job.im glad i found your track in the search engine.^.^

Thanks for introducing me to this wonderful song. After hearing this, it inspired me to look up the original and take myself on a 2 hour jazz journey which really benefitted my Sunday. Great work, good dynamics on the piece.