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I found this blowing around the nethers of my hard drive. Have a bang on it and tell me whether you think it has enough purchase to see it through to completion. Ta - Duk
Alright, time for another review!
To start off, I think the intro melody is nice. I like how it fades in slowly. But it goes on for a little too long. I think you could fix this if you add some more instruments. Like a piano melody playing over it. Add a kick drum earlier in it. Any instrument being added in there would be helpful, it would add more color and make it sound less repetitive.
The song gets way better when the high pitched piano comes in. But the build up to that one point took a little too long. The time could have been cut in half for that. It just took a lot of slow transitions and long waiting to get to it. Some transitions like a drum fill or a guitar cue would be great in this song.
This song has a nice a baseline! But it is too quiet. Try lifting that up a bit. The rest of the mix in the song is pretty good. maybe tone down the main melody a bit. It sounds a bit too loud and overpowering, leaving little room for the little instruments in the background to play and add more color and variety.
The song sounds pretty good mixing wise, but it never really has that full sound. The fullest is around 3:33 and it could go a little more. Adding more instruments and melodies would help this a ton
But overall, nice work, could use some more variety. And the mix is good. Just some slight adjustments to it and it would be golden. Some better transitions and instruments and this will sound much better! But nice work!
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my track "Stranded" and give some feedback!
4/5 Star rating
Thanks again for reviewing, like I said in the description this is just something I found on my hard drive I completely forgot I even did it. I think I did review your piece "Stranded", but some message came up saying it had to be checked. I'll try posting again just in case, so don't be surprised if there's two.
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