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So, the first novel in the Synergy Project series, Times of Joy - School days...
What if it were an anime or something? In that case, this is what its ED would sound like.
Also, I fixed the distortion problem, huzzah.
Nice start to the song! Pretty catchy. And I like the sound of the guitar! It really gives off a great feel and adds to the overall atmosphere
But to the song, the song could be mixed a little better. The guitar over powers the other instruments a little too much. If you mixed it together better, particularly the part at 0:20 seconds, you could get a much fuller sound. Adding more instruments could be a good idea also! I can hear some awesome piano in the background along with the guitar and some violins even! Also, the instruments could be a little better sound quality. It really isn't your fault, you work with what you are given, but I thought I would just point that out. The part that starts at 1:03 is the kind of sound you want to go for. It isn't quite there right here, but it's close! Really close! Try and get that sort of sound all of the time.
You have some really nice melodies in the song for sure though. Really gives off that hopeful feeling. reminds me of music from the sonic the hedgehog games :D I think this song would really improve with more instrument variety. Like in the intro, I think you could add an awesome sort of piano solo on the higher octaves and have that lead into the next part. Just an idea :P
But overall, the song is good. Awesome melody ideas, and the structure of the song is pretty good! You have some nice ideas you have put together, but it could sound a little more full and sound mix quality could be a little better. But overall, i like it!
Also it'd be awesome if you could check out my original track "Stranded" and give feedback!
4/5 star rating
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