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A Love Story [memories]

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Oct 3, 2012 | 7:41 PM EDT
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1.8 MB
1 min 56 sec
Score
4.52 / 5.00

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Rated 4.52 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
433 Plays | 24 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool
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Author Comments

Follow along with the lyrics:

There was a
Young boy with his heart on lockdown,
Hurt in the past by different women, listen,
He was talked down, girls shot down,
And he was left to pick his heart up from the rock ground

But he had enough,
of being sad as f..(f*ck)
So he changed his attitude and his average look,
Changed for the better, sunny from rainy weather,
Picked his head up, so now he wouldn't let a..

Female ruin it all, (NAHH),
He wasn't being hurt by these broads, (NAHH), uh,
And every afternoon he would kick it afterschool,
Next to the gym with a, couple of friends then a..

Girl walked by, finest thing he ever seen,
Beautiful face, nice body, and everything,
Then she stopped moving, he wanted to talk to her,
But he couldn't yo he knew it was a bad move

But she turned around looked at him and started grinning,
Then he stood up, heart beating a mile a minute,
Left his homies and started walking to her position, thinking,
WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING????

His mind said no, but his legs kept it moving, uh
He said wassup, they talked, and chopped it up uh,
They talked and chopped it up...but little did they know they were soon to fall in love.

Perfect for one another, such a good match
Stayed faithful and full of love when most cant,
He was happy living life on a good note,
He found a lover and knew that he couldn't lose hope

Opened his heart now,
And put his guards down,
A nice bright blue sky replaced his dark clouds

www.youtube.com/augustine audio
www.twitter.com/callmeaug ustine
www.soundcloud.com/august ineaudio

This is the fourteenth track on the promo tape entitled, Memories, which is a bunch of music ranging from 3 years ago...to now.

This song is one of my grails. The beat, the story, just amazing to me. This is the first time I actually ever wrote something like this. Welp, I did this when I was supposed to be doing homework lol, I was scrolling through 'Kamikazi1's beats until I came across this one, and the story just flew out of my pen. OH, and also, the story was supposed to be longer, and the girl eventually ends up moving away and they eventually lose touch. But after hearing this I realize that doesn't really fit. Leaving it how it is, is just perfect.

That's my memory.

TRACK 14.

Reviews


funnyman46funnyman46

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice story raps.

I also like how you sound over these relaxed, mellow beats. You should stick with this style, a la Joey Badass. Really feeling the sounds.



CrueltoolCrueltool

Rated 5 / 5 stars

you know what you do.. this going in mp3 - car album)) Keep banging))



juggaloalldayjuggaloallday

Rated 3 / 5 stars

This all sounds the same. Your not saying anything new.

You got to use better rhymes.......

yea the story is good, and your flow isnt bad.....
the lyrics need improvement.


TFreezyTFZ responds:

Am I being trolled? I'm VERY good at taking criticism....but this comment makes no sense o_O.

Well um, this is well over a year old, listen to my new stuff at:
www.youtube.com/augustineaudio
www.twitter.com/callmeaugustine
www.soundcloud.com/augustineaudio