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Jaco Timothy Leo
What's there already is really good, but the problem is there's absolutely no melodic line.
Basically, this is a very well written accompaniment, but without anything running over the top it just sounds incomplete.
If you put a saxophone (or other instrumental) line over the top, theres a lot of potential for this to be awesome, but until then it just doesn't quite sound finished.
Of course it's your piece and I don't know your intentions, it could still have its uses as a background loop or such.
Yeah I liked it how it was when I finished it, but thanks for the feedback, probably would have sounded better with another instrument thrown in there
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