I have no complaints it sound great to me it original to me 10/5

I don't wanna sound too critical, its a really clean beat and nice sound but a few things did irk me. For one thing it doesnt sound original, I've heard the melody used in same sequence in quite a few old trance/vocal songs before but thats not a big deal, if you look hard enough probably every melody has been used before. The biggest thing is the vocals you added, they all sound so unaltered and dont go with the sound of the song at all, either add a bunch of effects to make them sound good or drop them imho. So just to clarify Im being blunt but not hating, I think you have a good start here that just needs polishing revising.