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There has been zero bombing done to my first version... sad days. Hopefully people don't do it again. Empty sounding parts are left open for (possibly) vocals. Enjoy!
5:30 for a f***ing preview???? I thought NSD Records were pushing it xD
lololol this version of the track was never finished haha
Oookaaaay... Dis jusst mindblowning xD
I think a good thing is to not introduce the drums from 0:00, wait for like 2 bars and then do it. This is my opinion and its the only thing that should change about this... ;D
You're such a flatterer man. This is really old... maybe I"ll take a look again, I like the chord prog in this one. Glad you enjoyed anyways. :)
This is melodically haunting, Lockyn. I wonder just what else you have in mind here?
That piano right before the 3:00 mark got kind of "up there," but as I've said before: what do I know? Pffft.
Aww, I didn't even know you reviewed this! Thank you :3 I really liked the chord progression and melody in this one, even though it's really badly produced xD I'll see what I can do with it after the stuff I'm working on right now ;)
I think what's causing the drowing on the song after :50 is the amount of decay and reverb on your pad because it is kinda long making it seem really overbearing on the melody of the song... if you have a method of reducing those (not by much) then I think it'll fit better.
Otherwise, nice work.
Thanks so much for reviewing! I did figure out something that's contributing to the drowning: the delay crash. I'll definitely see if your suggestion helps with it!
Thanks for listening!
The beginning, a piano hit with a 4/4 drum, with a slight high pitched stabby synth fading in. 00:25 the bass kicks in, and a nice bridge leading into 00:50. At this point I must say the sound is a little bit drowned, but it seems to resurface at about 1:15 or so. I like your compositional variation you use throughout the song, and the different selection of instruments. I like when it falls into a more downtempo, chilled ambient version of the song, left me reminiscing about olden times, so congrats, your song made me feel something. The bass instrument that's beginning to face in at about 3:20 sounds very buzzy, not really my taste but the transition at 3:45 was fantastic! The song is tapered from beginning to end, and very nicely done. My only suggestion is to work a bit on mastering, but all in all, I'm going to favorite this. 4.5/5 review 5/5 rate.
Happy raving my friend :]
Hey man! First of all, thanks so much for the detailed review.
I agree about the drowned sounding part after :50. My mastering skills aren't the best to say the least. xD I was actually worried that people would find the quiet part boring, so thanks! I hope it gave some reprieve from all the hard beatz in the first part, haha.
Thanks so much for listening, and for introducing your awesome musics to me! n__n time to listen... whee!
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