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Date
09/19/2012
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Song
10.2 MB
4 min 27 sec
Score
4.54 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Hey guys this is my new Electro house track for the NGADM round three against Waterflame. I spent many hours on this and it will be interesting to see how the results turn out! And ya, the vocals and lyrics are both me.

Leave me a review to let me know what you think : )

Reviews


BuoyBuoy

Rated 4 / 5 stars

You have a super-obvious, straightforward and prominent main melody and that is good. For some reason this particular melody feels kinda infantile and banal - especially compared to the main melodies in your previous submissions, which were real classy and funky. It gets a lot better when it's played by the badass bassy synth from 2:15 - it sounds a lot more appropriate then.

I enjoyed the additional sounds you have in this piece - especially that chord melody at 1:12 was a real treat, and you got to show off some, err, harmonic/music-theoretical skills if you see what I mean. Some other nice things were the robotic manipulation of the distorted synth at 3:02 and the more swing kinda rhythms towards the end.

These vocoded vocals have some real meat to them - but it's a bit jumpy and the heavy effects makes the lyrics a lot less intelligible. At least the most important part - the "tonight I will be moving to that symphony" line - is pretty clear so that's good!

It wouldn't hurt to have a few variations of the main melody, and at least a third theme/part in addition to the two you already have. The second half of the song is pretty much a ctrl+c, ctrl+v of the first half, with a bit more fills and a bit more crazy. You only have material enough for a 2 maybe 3 minute song in my opinion. Also the end was lazy as shit c:

8.3/10


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BrokenDeckBrokenDeck

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This sounds more dubstep than house to me personally, and the mixing was okay,
if not great. The entire track was WAY too hot and the waveform was practically
bulging the edges the whole way through. There was absolutely no dynamic
range that I could hear occurring during this track.


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GrantBowtie responds:

Thanks for the review. Ya it was a little too hyped probably; I'll consider it in my next ones.


SkyeWintSkyeWint

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Here's your round 3 review! It'll be a bit harsher than your previous reviews once more. Harsher the closer to the end we get!

And like I said to Waterflame, sorry if this sounds a bit harsh. :c I was not feeling very generous toward repetition in this round.

The Good:
-Hahahaha, that intro sounds very nice. It has some really cool sounds in it. I'm glad you changed up your synths some.
-I like the usage of all those cool little FX sounds throughout. They keep it a bit more interesting than what it'd otherwise be.
-SNAPS! Niiiiiice. I love snaps. You may not use them much but they sound really nice.
-A lot of the instruments sound pretty darn cool, you really know how made EDM.

The Not-So-Good:
-Okay, I turned my volume down to 13/100, and it STILL gave me a headache from the volume of it. Not everything needs to be so compressed that it's blasting out of my speakers.
-The vocals sound louder than the actual music. This isn't a good thing. For an intro where the volume is coming up, vocals should be turned down to the volume of the rest of the song. As-is, they overpower EVERYTHING in the build-ups.
-It gets very dubstep-monotonous at about 1:00-2:00 and 3:00-4:00. It's also varily monotonous in the 2:00-3:00 part simply due to lack of variation.
-Some of your wobble basses are out-of tune which doesn't sound very good.
-Outro isn't all that good, try having a little bit extra sound dying down rather than a single synth doing an arpeggio which I noticed you did in your round 1 song. I believe I commented on it then too.

Overall: This is pretty nice, but REALLY repetitive and overcompressed to a crazy amount. Unfortunately, it's not very different from your other songs either, so... This'll get a 5.5/10 from me.


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StepStep

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is an NGADM Round 3 Review.

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You know, in some aspects your track and Waterflame's are pretty similar! Both your tracks are upbeat, cleverly written and extremely fun to listen to, and both have a similar issue, but I'll get to that later. This is really darn awesome man. You're one of the best electro house producers on Newgrounds IMO.

May as well start with your production because it's absolutely incredible. Again, you brickwall the track like crazy but I'm not hearing any compression issues and everything is crystal clear... it doesn't seem like as much of a problem as it was in your Round 2 track to be honest. Everything is so clear and punchy. I honestly expect this kind of professional-tier production from mainstream artists. It's absolutely and undeniably brilliant. And your sounds are pretty darn awesome too. Each one was distinct from the rest and was mixed in really well. And this time the vocals actually sing something instead of shout random syllables, so that was a nice change. Not a fan of the heavy autotune but meh, that's just me.

Moreover your composition is just badass. It's not often you hear the blues scale in this kind of music, so I'll admit that was a pretty pleasant surprise! It sounds a bit unfitting I'll admit, but hey it's a step in a different direction from the usual mainstream stuff whose repetitive melodies don't venture outside the space of 3 semitones. I kinda like it and I'll admit that it's really catchy. This is just so fun to listen to. It's bouncy, upbeat, and it's got solid transitions. I quite like the transition at 2:00. It's incredibly abrupt, but damn it works so well.

However, the main issue that your track and Waterflame's both share is the fact that this is pretty monotonous, and while it didn't annoy me as much in Waterflame's track, it gets a bit obnoxious here. Once you think about it this only has one melody. That's it. No counter melodies or anything (except the vocal melody but in all honesty that isn't anything special). And other than that melody there are the parts at 1:00 and 3:00 that don't actually have a coherent melody I can follow.

I mean, they were produced so well, but they got very tiring to listen to (and the brickwalling didn't help). Your other tracks weren't as tiring because they had some more melodic variety to them but this just feels more monotonous than the others. I would suggest adding some more breaks, and maybe throwing in some different melodies, since you repeat the main melody many times to the point that it gets very predictable.

That's my only problem with the track. You lost one point because of it, but otherwise this is absolutely amazing. You're an incredible artist and I've added you to my favourite artists list because of it. Keep it up dude.

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SCORE: 9/10


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GrantBowtie responds:

Thanks so much step it was a good run and you were super helpful throughout the whole thing : )


Fyrehydrant5454Fyrehydrant5454

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I like it! Not as much as your last 2, but it is still amazing. Something about your beats, they are very catchy and immensely fun to listen to. You are my favorite artist on newgrounds by a fair margin, and I am excited to see what the judges make of this track.
I'm not a huge fan of the voice you used in the song, it seemed a little to robotic and distorted. I agree with the doctor on the intro being a bit iffy. But your drops, if I may call them that, are simply astounding. They maintain the beat, aren't to hectic, portray the melody well, and are just fun to listen to. I love the different effects that you throw in at points. The bass and the lead synth work in such great coherency that you lose yourself in the music at the 'drops'. The kick and snare in this song are also good, and many a song has failed for lack of powerful drums.

I think that Waterflame may have met his match with this, and I am excited to see who wins. Good luck and keep making music!
10/10 5/5


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GrantBowtie responds:

Whoa - I should just forward this review to the judges for their consideration! Thanks.