Nawt Bad.

Good... Needs Work Though

Very interesting sound! But it could use a bit of mastering.
The piano is a bit too upfront, especially when it comes in; it sounds really out of place. And when it fades out it sounds very unnatural. The bass is really fat and heavy and it almost feels like there's water bubbling around my ears.
The drums kick really violently like gunshots.
Louder is not necessarily better, but good work nonetheless! Keep posting music. :)

I see lots of potential. Just needs a bit of polish.

This isn't bad. It has an urban flair, but becomes more lighthearted and playful. I find the percussion a little rough in the beginning. Almost like it's too soft, actually. I would maybe try to make the percussion just a little sharper (not enough to become grating, but enough to stand out from the synth). Other than that not bad at all.