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Quest of the Foggy Tobes

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3.8 MB
1 min 41 sec
4.00 / 5.00

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Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
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Thanks for checking out this WIP.
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This sounds great! The instruments work really well together and the intro has a 'mellow' quality to it that suits the overall theme of the piece. Seeing as this is a WIP though, I'd say that the volume balancing could do with a tweak- the background chord progression dominates just a little too much, which stops the melody from standing out. I'd also say that the 'outro' ends somewhat abruptly- I realise it's necessary for decent looping with the drums, but a single, bold fading note might work well there. To be honest, these things are pretty minor as the piece you've already got sounds damn good, but I hope this was of some help to you anyway!

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acmeDyne responds:

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing about those horn chords. I think I'll re-voice them and add some instruments to reinforce the melody.
I'll try extending the guitar a little at the end also.
Thanks! That was exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


acmeDyne responds:

Indeed, lol.