Score: 7
"Ok; My first review in ages."
date: June 15, 2006
And only because it's you.
Ok---In the beginning I felt it was lacking depth. And once again.
I feel that your percussion is good.
But overpower too much.
You have great melodic lines going, however;
You once again have not put enough emphasis on the contrabass (if there even is one).
So the track seems too thin throughout the whole thing.
You had alot action in this piece, which I liked.
And great use of the bells.
The choir sounded rather fake---but unless you feel like spending thousands of dollars---I can see why. So dont worry there.
Your clarity is rather bad, due to no equalizing.
Making this track sound rather washed out (Like my previous tracks, before I mastered equalizing.)
You're a great composer Sorrow---But there are still errors that need correction.
I'll admit that I've lost alot of my own melodic feel, but you still have yours.
The way I see it in this track--You had alot great idea's, just not executed well enough.
-Sorry for being harsh, and I hope you'll forgive me :P
-Christian Sandviknes
Author's Response:
Pfft, Silly Zeth, you're true words and facts do not phase me! I turn a blind eye to your review --_--!
No No I joke, I jest, I jibe. Whenever I make a song of this caliber (ie, more then 10 instruments), equalizing becomes so friggen hard, and I understand that. I guess I just need to pay more attention to what i'm doing with those lil knobs.
Do not apologize for your thoughts Zeth, they were good ones. Thanks for the review ^^.