Not bad. I can hear what you are trying to get across and its brilliant. But you need better instrument choices. Whilst in FL. Click channels at the top and select Sytrus. Right click the opposite facing arrows on the top right of the sytrus pop-up. You are welcome. Also, I am guessing this is in the demo?
Anyways. Last note, try to stay with the general feel of the song. I noticed it kind of went off on a bit of a tangent near the end.
Over all, good job. Keep it up. Get used to FL and learn the instruments and I know you will go far.
Can't wait to hear more!
~Xsalvaz