It's a heartfelt song, but it's a shame when the producer tags the instrumental like that. It really does throw the attention off your vocals (of which I felt the volume was a little low). Nice choice on the intstro, though. And your words have meaning, which ain't around enough today.

It started well, but the "Sonic beats" spoiled it.
Also, I'm not a fan of the use of a fadeout to end.
The female voice is very nice, I would like to hear more of her.