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Aug 10, 2012 | 3:02 AM EDT
File Info
6.3 MB
4 min 34 sec
3.22 / 5.00

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Rated 3.22 / 5 stars
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580 Plays | 32 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

This is a sad-ish techno trancey song that I wrote today. Please listen to the whole thing!

It's funny how this song is 4:30. I used to have a lot of difficulty writing songs that were even 3 minutes long, but now it's a process that just happens. Maybe I need to trim them down.


P.S. ArcaneSoul, I stole one of your tricks :D



Rated 5 / 5 stars

This song has quite a variety. It's great for those who have ADD X)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

What trick? lol

Also the melodies in here just didn't ring to me that well i dunno.

And don't worry, it is almost impossible for me now to make a 4:00 song without is going longer XD

johnfn responds:

When you do a build up you bend a string a full octave and have it finish right when the build up ends. It makes a build up much more exciting. Probably this isn't *just* your trick. :D

I agree, the melodies here are not spectacular - my sad songs usually have less exciting melodies. Something to work on. Thanks for the review.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not my favorite of your songs. Kind of felt like you were trying to do too many things in this song. I don't mind variety, but it felt like there was a little too much in this one.

johnfn responds:

Heheh, thanks. I wrote this piece pretty fast so parts of it lack some polish I agree... Should teach me to slow down and think.

Also, now that you and a few people customarily listen to my music, I worry about whether you guys will like it or not - especially when I submit a song like this which I like but don't think is a masterpiece. It's enough to make me want to hold off on a release until everything is perfect, but I think that would lead to me never releasing anything. So I release a lot of quantity hoping to occasionally notch quality as well.

Thanks for the review.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Terrific song i love it hope to hear more!! :D

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