The buzz got to me...
Going down, I think the overall problem was the sound quality. A little clean up and maybe a slower tempo might make this better.
A note for Demonicscythe: While you may be criticizing and flaming, it does no good when a person is willing to improve, and if you're going to insult, atleast spell "DISGRACE" correctly. It's a disgrace to the human language, y'know? c:
This is just asking to become a better peace, I'm sure of it!