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So I made this after thinking of the melody at a trip to a mall. Think of the piano as night and the synth lead as day.
Really not bad.
Thank you! :)
I like the crescendo and decrescendo of all the instruments trying to lead to a day and night kinda feature, and I really feel the synthesizers do lead to a noisy day... that said though...
The piano was a nice and simple melody. Nothing complex, easy to follow, and soothing. No Beethoven, but it defiantly is listenable.
The day was kinda lacking... It doesn't really add any actual progress to the sound your making besides making it contrast more with the original beat. This can be seen as a simple symbolism sound effect that is to depict the entire turn of a day, but your ending kinda ruins it with the crash role, making it loose all the vibe built up through pacing...
Honestly, as creative as this is, stuff like this has been done before, but with different instruments and pacing...
That said though, I AM VERY GLAD TO ANNOUNCE that you do have the potential to enhance your musicality to be more inspiring. You understand the basics of music, and that it needs to create feeling to be successful, and this song does do that. Just keep working to improve your quality and sound. It will take some work, but you can definitely accomplish it and create your own imagestyle of you. :D
Wow, this is the most detailed and helpful review I've ever gotten, either on here, Reddit, or Soundcloud! This is a really big help, and I'm really thankful for your kind words at the end! I'm very happy I've gotten even that far; I've only been producing for a month now, so I'm grateful that people feel this way :)
Also, since by "crash role" I'm not sure whether you mean the crash cymbal or the piano & synth playing together during the drop, I'm not really gonna respond to that, since I'm not sure of my opinion on that part anyway XD
Yeah, I was going for a type of song that could be both relaxing and dance-worthy. I've actually made about 8 songs that I haven't put on here, so I might put them on here soon.
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