00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Someone gifted Ministerhomer supporter status!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Ascend

Share Download this song

Author Comments

That last song left a bad taste in my mouth, so I decided to make a quick one to get me out of that funk.

I challenged myself to use only the virtual instruments that came with Mixcraft -- no synth VSTs or anything like that. Just some reverb, EQ, compression, etc... Some of these "stock" instruments aren't as bad as I thought, hmm...

Also, Skye, I don't think this counts as a fade out, but if it rubs you the wrong way, let me know.
________________

The path to enlightenment has drawn to a close. The time is now; seize the moment and become what you were meant to be...

EDIT: Changed a few things -- annoying soft clicks at the end though because of tempo markers -- I'm looking in to it.

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

A personal message to me? o.o You didn't have to, I'm flattered. ^_^ And I consider that more than enough reason to give this a friendly review.

Now, before I get to actually reviewing this, I just want to say a few things.
1. You use Mixcraft? Well, that answers the question I was trying to figure out of what DAW you use. I use FLS myself. ^_^
2. Default 'stock' instruments can be surprisingly good if used right. And hey, you can certainly use them right.
3. I'm done. Yeah, I probably shouldn't have put this as part of the little "list" of things I wanted to say, but it would've looked weird if I put it afterwards awkwardly. :<

THE GOOD:
-I really, REALLY like that guitar sound, whether it's a preset/default instrument/whatever. It's pretty darn good.
-Some of the harmonies are very very nice.
-1:05 BIRDIES :D That's definitely a much better ending than a simple fadeout.

THE NOT-SO-GOOD:
-The drums seemed very lackluster and dull, particularly the snare.
-Some of the rhythms and harmonies seemed off, and rather odd. Might want to recheck some of them.
-Too darn short! Of course, with default "stock" instruments you generally can't really do much, I suppose, so that's not too bad.

Overall: I'm sorry, I liked Shiver Mountain better - if only because, that one transition. Day-uhm, it was amazing. Overall though, this was pretty good. Could use some improvement definitely, but at least it's not taking off of another artist, right?

Birdinator99 responds:

I'm kind of surprised you liked Shiver Mountain better -- and also the guitar sound! That's my least favourite instrument in this piece for sure.

I like the snare. I'm pleased with the sound I got out of it -- it started pretty flat, but it's where I want it right now.

When you say the drums seemed dull -- the snare is the only drum (?); do you mean the tambourine? If you're listening for a kick drum or something, it's not there. Things sound bright to me...

I don't know what rhythms or harmonies you could be talking about. You should let me know the times in your review response response!

Too short? Pfft. lol

I don't know, man, I really thought you would like this one more than you did. I'm not used to scoring 3/5, and I feel like I let you down. I've got to keep trying, though.

Thanks for the review!

You created a nice atmosphere in a limited setting, good job!

I particularly liked the birds at the end, they closed the lid nicely.

The one thing that stands out for possible improvement is that your melodies and such still sound a bit robotic, so I think the velocities might need more variation (like that piano thing I mentioned long long ago). Also maybe speeding up and slowing down in some areas, such as progressively lengthening the silence between the last few notes.

But as I said the atmosphere you created is fantastic! Contemplative and airy, maybe bittersweet but not quite sure...

You're always getting better!

-Dright

Birdinator99 responds:

Glad you liked it -- I made a couple changes based on your suggestions; clear your cache and check it out!

Not ideal, but better, I feel anyway.

Credits & Info

Artist

Listens
1,137
Faves:
1
Downloads
30
Score
Waiting for 3 more votes

Uploaded
Jul 30, 2012
5:37 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.3 MB
1 min 26 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.