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Jul 24, 2012 | 3:54 PM EDT
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Song
5 MB
3 min 39 sec
Score
4.53 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.53 / 5 stars
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3,348 Plays | 128 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

This is the rebirth of my song "I am a sinner"
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/450413

This version features vocals from Inari134

Enjoy!
Track 2 from album "Born"

Reviews


googletopergoogletoper

Rated 4 / 5 stars

lol cool I like it


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Lone-X responds:

Thanks!

Peace and love,
Lone X


RED-X-MASTER-777RED-X-MASTER-777

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

"I've had better"
Says it all about this song...

Honestly, nothing crazy with the beats aside from the random rhythmic changes (which are nice, but can be better. You may need to work harder to appeal to a larger audience, but I bet you would get enough sales on this album to make it buy for a month.
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Comments to the lyrics of the song
Lone X:... man, musical phone sex is the new way man, you gotta be able to bring to the ladies a bit better :P

Inari: Way to have a sexy voice, although it could have been a bit more whiny for my taste. ;)
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Review

This seems more like this like a comedy, and I'll give you the benefit of that doubt. In this case, it is quite funny, although the joke at the end was kinda obvious about it being bad sex once I thought about it for 5 seconds after hearing "this has never happened to me before". Still, the music does go with the lyrics, and timing for the beats is not an issue.

however, the actual music itself hurts you... Yeah, it is a trance, but I feel you could make it stand out more by adding more crescendo's and decrescendo's as you got closer to the climax of the piece. On top of that, the passion just isn't matching the recievers enthusiasm
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However, this trance is still enjoyable, and can please many listeners (as I read some of the comments). And if that defines how successful this track is, I'd argue you were successful in completing it. I just wish your beat was stronger in the melody compartment to compete with other producers. (Then again, this is a trance...) Still, keep up the work and strive for excellence Mr. Lone X, and good luck with sales.
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Actually, here is what this music made me think the 3rd time I listend to it...
+The neighborhood creep (sorry Lone) sneaking around to his girlfriends house, and get her off while she's in the shower listening to his music over the speaker phone after being woken up some early time in the morning. During this, he sets the audio to continuously stream to her, and finds a comfy spot in the bushes to let one out. The audio stops for a second some time after this, and she's exclaims "WTF?" He apologizes and restarts the tape and they continue...After some time, she oozes, and takes a second to breath. As he is about to climax, she gets out of the shower only to look out the window and laugh at his incredibly small genitalia, making him lose his boner, and exclaim smugly "I've had better" and hangs up the phone. He runs away and murmurs to himself, "Mother-"

Wow... that was kinda weird after typing that.... (Power of your trance I guess :P)


Lone-X responds:

Whoa, for a song to make people smile, it made you do A LOT more than smile lol. Thanks for the review...
BUT,

It sounds like the way you read into it, that YOU may be the creep in the bushes(checks outside window, feels like he is being watched)

Don't get me wrong, I am flattered, but just use the front door if you want, you don't have to hide in the bushes outside(hear's doorbell) OH SHIT, I GOTTA GO...

Peace and love,
Lone X


FariyredFariyred

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Your music is so hot!! I've been one of your biggest fans! Keep up the good work cutie! =)


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Lone-X responds:

LOL Thanks for the review!!

Peace and love,
Lone X


PoniiboiPoniiboi

Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOL! Very imaginative.


People find this review helpful!
Lone-X responds:

LOL thanks!!

Peace and love,
Lone X


EternalEndeavorEternalEndeavor

Rated 5 / 5 stars

haha totally unexpected but I like it! awesome work XD


People find this review helpful!
Lone-X responds:

Thanks!!! It was so fun to make lol.

Peace and love,
Lone X