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JamesMusic - Broke It(WIP

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Credits & Info

Date
07/23/2012
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
1 min 33 sec
Score
4.56 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.56 / 5 stars
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363 Plays | 35 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - House
Tags:
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james
broke

Author Comments

Remake of my melody i made in Utopia.......started from scratch to make a new song. Very early WIP, no percussion except kick :p.

Reviews


gamerk1d51gamerk1d51

Rated 3 / 5 stars July 23, 2012

So, I gave this a three, but I wanted to give it more.

I live breathe and eat house. When I'm not listening to house, EDM or trance, I'm reading about it. And that automatically colored how I viewed the song, because, objectively? This is a pretty healthy tune.

What killed me was that this whole selection sounded like a build-up to something greater. It struck me as something that would be produced by a big name like Suspect 44 or Daniel Kandi- really, the notes struck me as reminiscent of tracks I've heard by them. I'm not looking for a "drop"- what I'm looking for as a shift in tune, a build to a metaphorical climax, the next step in the journey that every good house song is.

I saw in your comments that you hadn't added percussion except for a kick. So, if you make this longer, more detailed, and with a solid percussion line (maybe something to compliment the melody instrumental that breaks in at :34), this will become more than a "first step". It'll become that journey I spoke about.

Good work. For everyone's sake, keep producing. For real.