Your cries are beautiful and The darkness of the famed emotional abyss vibrates within it but it doesn't swallow the song, it works within the atmosphere you've created so that it is represented but not praised or surrendered to. In many emotion filled songs this is hard to accomplish, it would've been too easy for you to get overly dark but it sounds like you held some of that back to make a really cool scene.
In lieu of this, I think you should keep telling stories. I'm glad Anchorwind's remix brought me here.