Good, could be better. Unorthodox but flows pretty well altogether. Potential is there. Just have to unlock it. Stay up.

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~Rymix

A fast beat with a slow tone... This track has so much potential for lyrics! I will get around to using this. I look for this in songs... How well you can lay a track down... How well we can tell a story, does the beat tell a story? Well it does. And I feel it. This is what the people need more of. Keep it up, Just hone your Synth skills a little more, and you'll be getting 5 stars from me. Yours truly bro.

Not bad man not bad at all