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Uploaded
May 4, 2006 | 3:06 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
4 min 19 sec
Score
2.12 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 2.12 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,294 Plays | 242 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

my new mix its a hole new style!!!!!

Reviews


ImperfectDiscipleImperfectDisciple

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well then...

...I encounter a lot of songs like these, both in the style, and the overall message shown from the song. This is nothing wrong on your part, so if this seems like you're getting bombed big time, then an apology comes with this review, because the intent of this review is to help you, not decontruct you. Anyways...

This is a pretty solid song. Mixed alright, and just enough to get by with. The problem is, you really have so much to add to this song, that in the long run, you probably shown have thought about what you could improve with the song. Think about it, your song tends to be VERY empty, and I mean VERY. There's the beat, the vocal, the guitar, and maybe a couple of effects. Where's the variety in that? Seriously, you could have that airy feel with the fading vocal to create something tranquil, but then use electric guitar with some backround bass synths to add that pump-it-up style in there. Getting a better drum sound is something you'll have to look at as well, the drums became a stranger to the song because of how the song is written.

So basically, in a nut-shell, you need to add diversity and put a lot more time with you're music making. Who cares if you want to get big or not? The goal is to get big. Why? Because you learn more from working your butt off getting the best song ever out onto the Internet compared to making an okay song which you learn absolutely nothing from because of the time and effort you put into your song. It builds your patience, creativity, and much more with it.

So get out there and make that difference between okay and TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

-SuperDrummer146


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NaL3sNaL3s

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

listen to g rave

g rave is awesome, so listen to whatever he says :)