What I think of V 1.0
Intro sounds pretty good. There's just that swell at 0:30 that seems to break up in the speakers, maybe you could mix it a little better. Is it moving from left to right and back to left? Sounds like it's shifting around. Maybe it's the volume at center that's causing the static, unless that's all on purpose. I'd say, ditch the crackly sound if you can.
Later in the song when the drums bit starts, it just seems to compound and I dunno, honestly sounds a bit messy. Don't misunderstand me though, this is a great track, and I really like all of it. Just try to smooth it out some, it sounds a bit clunky.
Towards the end with the guitar, man I wish there was a whole song with that going on, for another four minutes. Seriously I love the sound, it reminds me of the Satriani album with all the electronic effects. I can't wait to hear V 1.1 or 2.0 or whatever you're gonna call it. ^^