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-His & Hers- Deathbeds

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Date
07/06/2012
File Info
Song
1.4 MB
1 min 15 sec
Score
3.21 / 5.00

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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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-His & Hers- Deathbeds

This track, I dunno where it came from, just wrote it one night.
You should be a totally cool person and leave some feedback.

Original Beat: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/492414

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Rated 4 / 5 stars July 7, 2012

I like the intro, cool flutter there. At :15, I think the voice you used for the Illinois line was a tad forced, especially since that was the only line where you changed your voice that much. The track's got this surreal nursery rhyme effect to it, which I think fits the dark subject matter. I noticed in this track, and The Alchemist's Beginning, you tend to end a lot of lines right on the bar line and there's always this slight pause until you start the next line. It'd be really cool if at some point, you tried experimenting with what happens in those pauses. Make some lines short, some lines long. Mix it up. I don't know. You got the vocabulary for it, you got the flow for it, you got the imagination for it. Oh, and thanks for using my beat! If I come up with a better one, I'll let you know.


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