the reverb messes up the song a lot making it hard to listening but the beat and the colllaboration of song is good. and does your tags say rapefunk? oo

this isn't funk... Not sure whats up with all the dissonance.
It also sounds like your chans were too loud, your basically getting a which sound is louder war.

I'm just not a fan of this particular song, but don't let one opinion be taken too hard.
Keep up the effort m8.