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My remix of the Last of the Mohicans theme song, Promentory.
There is one part of it that I cannot seem to get myself happy with, but until I do I'll let you guys listen to it at least.
I'm not sure what you intended this song for, but I'll assume you made it for mainly listening as opposed to Video Game music or for a movie or something for the sake of the review.
I would suggest trying to cut out some of the repetitiveness of the piece to retain audience attention. Now this is purely preference. If a riff is incredibly amazing, I like hearing it again. If not, well, there's no use repeating it more than necessary.
Of course, this is all just a matter of opinion. Keep at it! :)
I Intended for the song to have sex with your ears. Glad you like it.
DISCLAIMER = NOT BEING BOSSY JUST HELPFUL ;)
Yeah this was a clean piece - say some things I liked - namely the rhythm and the percs u had. However there are some things I think should be looked at man.
1. So yea intro-ing, with simple hats by them selves not always the best way to go - my suggestion would be add a nice sweep u like and the transit that sweep with those hats and go from there.
2. Also maybe add some other transitions - I mean the reverse cymbal with some flanger was cool and all, but maybe add some else after that - like a reverb kick, or even better a bass pause with a sweep - yeah.... thats pro.
3. And o yea- at 2:30 there seems some sort of fuzzy ness thats not too nice fo the ears so maybe check that one, u could buffer that with - sidechained sweep I HIGHLY recommend.
4. So that pad break u had - I heard a bit of dissonance in it - some bad vibes with the pad and the swaped stereo string of kicks ( or watever that was )- in conjunction that abrupt let up to lead was a bit - rough - maybe clean it up by makin it fade in - ya feel?
So yea - man great idea - just a little more tidying up - it happens.
Thanks Pulsar you rock with these really constructive comments. They'll help me make better music.
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